201101883 Hyojeong Shim -What strong points does the speaker already have? She was very confident and she was not afraid to give a speech in front of so many strangers. Her voice was very loud as well.
-How well did the audience get to know the speaker? She talked a lot about herself and loud voice caught my attention. That's how I got to understand her better.
-DId the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes. Very clear and audible tone of voice.
-Did the speech have a definite opening, body and conclusion? Yes.
-Comment on the speaker's use of notes. She was holding her script but that doesn't mean she was reading it the whole time.
-What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? Her speech was incredible and I like how she had courage to present in front of public places. However, I think it would have been better if she had more of a friendly tone. Her voice was loud but it was too loud sometimes that it did not come off as friendly. Other than that, I liked every part of her speech.
-What did you like about the presentation? It was well prepared and I like how she looked eager to let people know about herself.
201101883 Hyojeong Shim
ReplyDelete-What strong points does the speaker already have?
She was very confident and she was not afraid to give a speech in front of so many strangers. Her voice was very loud as well.
-How well did the audience get to know the speaker?
She talked a lot about herself and loud voice caught my attention. That's how I got to understand her better.
-DId the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes. Very clear and audible tone of voice.
-Did the speech have a definite opening, body and conclusion?
Yes.
-Comment on the speaker's use of notes.
She was holding her script but that doesn't mean she was reading it the whole time.
-What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
Her speech was incredible and I like how she had courage to present in front of public places. However, I think it would have been better if she had more of a friendly tone. Her voice was loud but it was too loud sometimes that it did not come off as friendly. Other than that, I liked every part of her speech.
-What did you like about the presentation?
It was well prepared and I like how she looked eager to let people know about herself.