-What strong points does the speaker have? She does not seem very nervous in front of many people. She spoke english very comfortably without much trouble.
-How well did the audience get to know the speaker? I don't think much information about the speaker was given in this presentation. Rather than the speaker speaking about herself, the audience talked about their own experiences. So, it would've been better if she speaker talked more about her own story.
-Did the speaker speak clearly and audibly? She spoke very clear and audible. It was easy to understand what she was trying to say.
-Did the speaker have a definite opening, body and conclusion? Yes
-Please comment on the speaker's use of notes. She did not look at it much, but would've been better if she finished her conclusion without looking at her notes.
-What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? She could have spoken more about herself, rather than allowing the audience to speak. I could not learn much about herself.
-What did you like about the presentation? She was good with communicating with the audience, without getting nervous. She spoke clearly and calmly.
Sorry, I've made a mistake. The title should has been "The Ice-breaker Speech".
ReplyDeleteCommented by 201500651 Ye Seul Kim
ReplyDelete-What strong points does the speaker have?
She does not seem very nervous in front of many people. She spoke english very comfortably without much trouble.
-How well did the audience get to know the speaker?
I don't think much information about the speaker was given in this presentation. Rather than the speaker speaking about herself, the audience talked about their own experiences. So, it would've been better if she speaker talked more about her own story.
-Did the speaker speak clearly and audibly?
She spoke very clear and audible. It was easy to understand what she was trying to say.
-Did the speaker have a definite opening, body and conclusion?
Yes
-Please comment on the speaker's use of notes.
She did not look at it much, but would've been better if she finished her conclusion without looking at her notes.
-What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
She could have spoken more about herself, rather than allowing the audience to speak. I could not learn much about herself.
-What did you like about the presentation?
She was good with communicating with the audience, without getting nervous. She spoke clearly and calmly.