https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fw_kOBkHKZY
This is a four minute speech done by myself, Ki Hyun Lee. Please enjoy(not sure if you can but still...) ...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fw_kOBkHKZY
This is a four minute speech done by myself, Ki Hyun Lee. Please enjoy(not sure if you can but still...) ...
Comment by HwangHyelin
ReplyDeleteHe has an intelligent voice. And the audience get to know the speaker's hobby, future dream and many other things. He prepared a lot as he prepared the script. The speaker talked audibly and the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion. He didn't just keep looking at the notes. He tried to make an eye-contact with the audience. The one thing be desired is that if he prepared an visual factor, the speech could be more dynamic. Lastly, I like the speaker's way of speaking. He speaks in a calm.
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DeleteHe prepared a lot as he prepared the script.(X)
From his script, I could see that he prepared a lot.(O)
His speech was delivered in calm voice and posture unaffected by nervousness.
ReplyDeleteI also want to note how he fluently went from a point to another without unneccessary or awkward pauses in between. Four minutes were sufficient time for him to juggle a number of topics. This, however, was a sign that he might have been running out of details for each topic.
Comment by: Jung Youna from 11a.m. class