I couldn't include the audience in the video because the room was a bit small and the camera couldn't reach back further to capture them.. Hope you understand. Thank you. (Hyojeong Shim)
-What strong points does the speaker already have? She can speak english fluently with good intonation of words.
-How well did the audience get to know the speaker? I got to know about her story and her experiences at trips as well as her general information through the introduction.
-DId the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Very clear and audible. I can easily understand her speech.
-Did the speech have a definite opening, body and conclusion? Yes, it did
-Comment on the speaker's use of notes. It seems like she memorised her script very well. She did not make use any notes.
-What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? Although the pace for the speech was adequate, the speech went a little too long. Maybe eliminate some sentences in the script or talk a little bit faster to finish within 6 minutes.
-What did you like about the presentation? Her speech was well prepared. She had gestures in between her speech, which made me concentrate better.
I couldn't include the audience in the video because the room was a bit small and the camera couldn't reach back further to capture them.. Hope you understand. Thank you. (Hyojeong Shim)
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ReplyDelete-What strong points does the speaker already have?
She can speak english fluently with good intonation of words.
-How well did the audience get to know the speaker?
I got to know about her story and her experiences at trips as well as her general information through the introduction.
-DId the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Very clear and audible. I can easily understand her speech.
-Did the speech have a definite opening, body and conclusion?
Yes, it did
-Comment on the speaker's use of notes.
It seems like she memorised her script very well. She did not make use any notes.
-What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
Although the pace for the speech was adequate, the speech went a little too long. Maybe eliminate some sentences in the script or talk a little bit faster to finish within 6 minutes.
-What did you like about the presentation?
Her speech was well prepared. She had gestures in between her speech, which made me concentrate better.